[Wision--SesQuaTercet USA ™ (de facto trademark)] The Son Dey School of Christ Science

in conjunction with

project 'lambhorn'

presents

ARCHAEODUS
[First Journey] Adam in Eden

a science docu-drama, PG/17 UltraVivid

redacted by Mr. Raymond Kenneth Petry, Strategic-Director
a Wision--SesQuaTercet USA production

(a division of Lanthus Corporation)

[index][screenwrite][music][sets&settings][budget][prospectus][roles]
The story of Jehovah's arrival on Earth with Adam [and Eve] and their life in Adam's Eden kindergarden (choreographed to music) tells a plausible beginning of modern scientifically advancing society, of what actually happened on Earth about 3670 BC, of our common past and our connected future.
[Music specified in this screenwrite is the Strategic-Director's selection from hundreds of CD's of existing works by artists whose orchestral timbre and lyrics fit each on-screen activity, and is not otherwise representative of projects SesQuaTercet and its purposes nor of 'lambhorn' Scientific Scriptural exegeses]

Scene Script 27

'reassess'

[part 01:56~ The Memory of Trees/enya]

CUT IN
27 EXT - TOPPLED GARDEN: WAY TO RIVER - SUNSET (NO MOON)

ELLE WALKS THROUGH THE TOPPLED GARDEN broken grounds:

    (00:00 strings)
Many trees are fallen: Broken irrigation water flows:
    (00:10 down stir)
The compost-pile is spilled:
    (00:23 pluck up-well)
The small pet-sheep/goat, still tied, is crushed under its fallen palm tree:
    (~00:39 piano, mmm)
New-drying crockery is smashed, scattered: Other pets are gone: Elle approaches the hut now ripped, broken:
    (00:54 over)
Tables are tossed, teepee-cooler toppled, stores broken and scattered about:
    (00:59 +ahh)
Elle picks-up Eve's doll, and ponders:
    (01:09 boom forte, chorus)
Elle breaks to full cry - then leaves the grove:

UP THE SLOPE TO THE RIVER'S EDGE: FACING SUNSET:

    (01:24 aah, harpsichord)
The boat-raft is impaled on a rock: Elle picks-up Adam's broken clay toy-spaceship, ponders:
    (01:38 boom forte, chorus)
Elle breaks again to cry, stares across waters into reflected sunset:
    (01:54~ fade: grind)
ANGLE: FOUR noisy merchant-MEN approach along the shore, intoxicatedly angrily jabbering-arguing their losses, court-like, as: PROSECUTOR, JUDGE, DEFENDANT wearing shell necklaces of several strands and carrying a jug, and codefendant TURNED-WITNESS.
    (01:56~ stop: grind)
The men's voices louder, interrupt: ARTICULATE:

[NOTA BENE: men-speech is very consonantal, their conversation is rapid, slurred, emphatic, abutted]

PROSECUTOR
y lft th rp untd
DEFENDANT
(points to Turned-Witness)

h drpd th oar
JUDGE
(hand on Defendant shoulder)

y tpd th bt ovr
DEFENDANT
I ws hldng th ls bxs - I svd th brly-brw
(grins bravely, holds-up jug)
TURNED-WITNESS
(cockily)

I ws hldng th dnky - w'd stl hv th dnky: if th rp ws td
PROSECUTOR
(cockily)

th dnky wld hv drwnd whn th bt snk: if th rp ws td
JUDGE
th bt wld hv fltd n th bxs: if th rp ws td
They notice Elle watching them:

And approach her in a clearing near the water's edge:

PROSECUTOR
who is ths wmn
JUDGE
prtty wnch
DEFENDANT
th mn rn wy
PROSECUTOR
th mn cldn't kp hr
TURNED-WITNESS
th rp wsn't td
ALL MEN
(coarse-laugh)
PROSECUTOR
(to Elle)

wr is yr hsbnd
ELLE
Hello, gentlemen.
DEFENDANT
(aside)

ls wmn - nt gd
TURNED-WITNESS
(shirks blame)

hw dd y gt hr
ELLE
I live here, this is my home, thank you.
JUDGE
no bdy lvs in ths plce
PROSECUTOR
wht is ths ncklce - ths is nt a wmns ncklce
ELLE
It is my necklace - I have worn it many years.
DEFENDANT
it is wrth hlf a bx of swt spce
TURNED-WITNESS
(asides)

unls sh wrs the spce, dncng fr us
(laughs rudely)
ELLE
(rebukes)

It's broken - it doesn't do anything for you - it's not worth your spice.
JUDGE
(argues)

I cn b th jdg of tht - shw m yr ncklce
(grabs the watcher roughly)
(examines it)
DEFENDANT
(fingers cheapest necklace)

th wrth is one strng of m shl ncklce
ELLE
(strives for harmony)

My necklace is not for bargain, thank you,
(emphasis)

Gentlemen.
TURNED-WITNESS
mn dnt brgn wth ls wmn - lt us brgn wth yr hsbnd
ELLE
(reemphasizes)

Thank you, again, Gentlemen:
(backs away to taut)

The necklace is not your bargain.
JUDGE
(ires red to her face)

w thnk w cn brgn fr a ncklce - gt yr hsbnd, wmn
(pushes Elle with free hand)
But the necklace holds taut:

Surprised at the necklace tautness, Judge shoves Elle backward with both hands holding the watcher:

Elle stumbles back-down: the watcher-necklace pulling the Judge down to lie on Elle.

JUDGE
(vis-a-vis fiercely)

I wl gv y wht a wmn dsrvs
(glares-grins)
Judge squirms on Elle: She struggles:

Finger-nail-scrapes his cheeks bloody: He ignores the abuse: checking her arms:

She top-head-bashes his nose:

He withdraws uncertainly: begrudgingly loosing the watcher: face and nose bloody-oozing:

He hand-and-kneels-back: Free-hand nursing his nose.

She stands: He crouch-stands: backing-away stooped to near the others: wiping his cheeks: nursing his nose:

ELLE
(exasperated)

Stupid mankind, doesn't know which side of a woman they're on - how will they ever know which side of the planet-Earth, they're on?!
All except wounded Judge, grin at each other: guffaw-laughing:
TURNED-WITNESS
tp-sd, I hp - nd lvng it
ALL MEN
(laugh)
All four side-back-away - and at a distance, saunter-on, following the stream: wounded Judge tending his face:

Elle waits 'til they are gone.

AND RETURNS TO THE WATER'S EDGE:

Self-inspects blood on hands, face, clotheskins:

Tries to rinse-wash:

Pauses: Breaks to tears, and:

Cries: staring across the waters into the sunset:

ELLE
(implores into next music)

Why?!
(grimaces-cries)
27
CONTINUE

[script 28]



Strategic-Director: Mr. Raymond Kenneth Petry
Producer-Director: Wision--SesQuaTercet USA
Screenwriter: Mr. Raymond Kenneth Petry
Register: Wision--SesQuaTercet USA
Recipient: The Son Dey School of Christ Science: project 'lambhorn'
Owner: Lanthus Surrogate Executive Accessions Management

The teachings hereïn are not secularized nor classified: Sunday School pupils, Primary Class students, Normal Class graduates, scholars, researchers, astronomers, scientists, governments, find this coursework timely, modern, global, historical, democratic. The syllabus is the ALMS Program: Astronomics, Linguistics, Mathematics, Systematics: Scientific inferentiation on Holy Biblical Scripture: What actually happened.
FUNDAMENTAL CONTROVERSES: Christian Science Class Instruction * RKPetry

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